Twitter Story

I liked the story of Kintevous because he uses a story that is an actual possibility and many students have probably done several times in the past. This story resonates with me because I know I have gone early to class before and I know it is not fun because you could have slept for another hour. The story is great because it is really only about one person but that one person is himself which engages me more than stories of several people. This happened to him so it is a non fiction story which sometimes people hook onto better than fiction I know I do. The tweets are easy to follow and understandable which is great when trying to string them together. They are cohesive because they flow together the way that they are supposed to and they make the story easier to comprehend. The use of pictures was great because it gives us a hint at what the emotions are supposed to be and it keeps the readers engaged by giving us something to look at and that works well in the story. It is a great life story to make sure that we are always aware of everything that we are going to interact with. Good with using punctuation and quotes and things of that nature it really adds intensity to the sentences that the reader is engaging with because it implies emotion. The structure of the sentences is great because they have good grammar and they really help explain the story of what he is trying to portray. Overall I think he does a good job of engaging the reader, he also structures everything in a logical way to where the story flows together as one. This is a great story I would love to read more of.